The actual #10 haiku

many leaves float through the air

sunlight gently fades

I walk thinking to myself

 

I had a thought for a poem go through my head about 5 years ago. I wrote it down but wasn’t quite happy with it.  I felt like there was something missing.  Then I remembered Haiku and applied the rules to this poem to get the above haiku.

Autumn

Leaves floating through the air
Sunlight gently fading
The wind tussles my hair
I walk thinking to myself

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