Haiku in a rhizome.

day lily,day lilies,rhizome
nakedly laying on the ground
somehow the rhizomes survived
 
 
I am pretty happy with this haiku. I am moving closer and closer to being able to write my haiku in one line. When Japanese poets wrote a haiku they wrote them in one line that was flush left. How is your writing going?

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