Dying of Thirst

river,creek,white water,

I was dying of thirst
I asked Jesus to be my water
now my well is never dry

 

I know that this poem is not a good senryu, but I wanted to share it. It is definitely not a haiku. But that is why this blog is called failing at haiku, sometimes I forget to add the nature element in, or rather don’t leave room for it. Some poems just beg to be written, even if they don’t fit the form 100%.

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