Friday Fictioneers is a group of bloggers who write 100-word stories after being inspired by a photo prompt posted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. It is not a closed group; you can join in! We are allowed to use the photo (taken by another writer) in our post and encouraged to leave each other comments. I write my story before I read any of the other writers’ creations. This week’s story is 99-words long.
Also, I have been using the hashtag #FridayFictioneers when I tweet a link to one of my Friday Fictioneer stories on Twitter. There are others using that hashtag too. If you have Twitter you should do the same on Fridays, maybe we could get the hashtag trending.
Tickets to Anguish
Joey stood outside, rain pouring down his back. What a fool he had been. He had trusted her to stay faithful once they were married.
“Ya gotta put a ring on it!” she had teased. “In today’s world, you can’t expect me to ignore other guys until you prove that you only want me.”
So Joey worked double shifts and saved to buy a ring. After a quick wedding he put her name on everything he owned.
Six months later she bought movie tickets and forgot to tell him. When he arrived she was walking inside with another man.
What a B***… poor fella…
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This is a dangerous situation, I hope he keeps his self control
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Ay-yi-YI, that HURTS! And are we surprised? Nope, not at all.
Super story this week, Symanntha. Glowing.
Five out of five military “Jody’s.”
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Poor choice. Hope it doesn’t put him off trying again.
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She’s so smooth I bet she’ll be able to explain it away to his satisfaction.
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Fickle woman!
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Sometimes you should listen to the warning signs…
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Dear Symanntha,
She’s a must to avoid. Is it too late for him to return the ring for a full refund?
Shalom,
Rochelle
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It’s too late for a full refund, but he will be more careful with his heart and finances in the future.
Thanks for reading!
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She sounds a perfectly selfish, unfeeling type. Unfortunately he committed too much to her before he found out her true character
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The title says a story in itself… Perfect…. 👍
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