PAD Challenge Day 24

poetry month photo for public use

photo curtesy of Poets.org

    Giving In
The thought
  E X P A N D S
Inside of mE
  like a  h o l l o w  point bullet
ripping
the fortitude
       from my flesh.
Discipline 
dissolves like paper iN tHe RaIn.
Any hope for me
floats
  down
    the
      drain.
.
April 26, 2018
This is shape poetry. The prompt was to write an anti-form poem. I hope this counts. The first half of this is a line that I have been trying to use for over 2 years now. Tell me what you think, I would really like some feedback on this one!
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