Friday Fictioneers is a group of bloggers who write 100-word stories after being inspired by a photo posted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. We are allowed to use the photo in our post and encouraged to leave each other comments. I write my story before I read any of the other writers’ creations, although I do often read Rochelle’s post before I write mine since it is right under the photo of the week. This week’s story is 102-words long.
Plotting
Malorie watched the snow fall in despair. If she ran away tonight it would be easy to follow her. She would leave her duffel bag hidden and try again in a few days.
Her plan was to live at the homeless shelter on 40th street until she finished school. Snooty Gloria would never dare to step foot inside that place. Dumb Todd told her he would search all of the buses if she ever ran away, so Malorie decided not to leave the city, but to hide in plain sight. Her aunt and uncle could have the money, but not her.
Smart girl! It takes intelligence and patience to plan and execute properly.
Great story!
I missed the deadline. Here is what I would have done:
Scott
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She certainly sounds like a strong young woman. Great story!
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Thank you!!
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You’re welcome!
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Bravo to her for doing what needs to be done and not letting anyone stop her
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She isn’t easily subdued, I hope she succeeds. I love her attitude, wanting to finish school, on her terms.
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Thanks for reading!
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It sounds like she are at a place where anything is better than staying… but she seems destined to succeed.
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Thanks for reading!
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